Aunt Wilma's vase is not Lalique;
Phoenix Glass of glowing salt that's
kasher,
brimming with the sweet of
challah,
naked table putting on the dress
of
shabbas:
naked as in
Solomon's Song,
young hearts like
gazelles of mankind
run like the dickens
to greet sundown.
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note
for some reason, something glowing reminds me of molten salt.
A table bathed in sunlight. It’s beautiful. So simple, yet somehow festive.
ReplyDeleteI like the young hearts running ‘like the dickens’; The expression in conjunction with this gentle poem made me screech to a sudden halt.
It amazed me when I saw it.
ReplyDeleteI'm already changing the poem around...
ReplyDeleteLet me know if it worse...
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